![]() If you agree, we’ll also use cookies to complement your shopping experience across the Amazon stores as described in our Cookie Notice. We also use these cookies to understand how customers use our services (for example, by measuring site visits) so we can make improvements. I can see that depending on how this series progresses into the future you can begin a new series further along by generations if you decide to keep Delphi as a constitutional monarchy.We use cookies and similar tools that are necessary to enable you to make purchases, to enhance your shopping experiences and to provide our services, as detailed in our Cookie Notice. solving mysteries from book 12 and meeting know races that have been discovered by the Paraxeans earlier in there history. I can see possible military expansion and the codification of the Delphi Government. with that in mind I like the way you have progressed with Catie it has the feel of a heroin and yet leaves the reader with a feeling of, I could see this being a real person although rare in ability, while being not soo far fetched to make her unreal. I would hate to give away any of your books story lines away as I would like to not spoil it for new readers which I recommend read this series. Isaac Arthur who touches these issue on you tube. You could progress your story of earths progress into a new age and how the governments respond to the transition from none space faring to colonizing as a side story that I find interesting. Book 12 opens so many options I cant see where your going. even the title did not give any hints of your plot. as it concerns Catie I was surprised and did not this books direction coming. you have story lines that can be explored as it relates to Book 7 (Delphi Exploration) and the Paraxeans and Book 8 (Delphi Colony) and how humanity builds a extra solar colony which could provide a good spinoff direction if a new story line takes up issues that came to light as it concerns colonialism and some of Earth's governments that is brought up in I believe book 11 I think (I don't want to give any spoilers away). I think this was a master stroke for this series and keeps your reading audience in suspense as to your direction. I think your transition from Book 10 (Delphi League) to Book 12 (Delphi Diversion) was a success it give you many options for your story line. although I hope you do not get board and abruptly end the story the same way. I would compare your series with the Honor Harrington Series as far as the way you keep the progression of the storyline flowing easily for your readers. I have one question are you planning to have this series extend out with many books and if you have not decided and are willing to listen to you readers I would like to say I hope you do and I enjoy these adventures. I cant see it happening without elected officials doing what they do best and ruin it all.Įither way I have loved your story and I am wondering when you see your next book coming out I would gladly pre order it on kindle. I am have issues trying to see how mark will be able to switch the Delphinine government to a Democratic one. I cant wait to see where the story goes and how the relationships in your latest book progress. ![]() Love your books, I have the kindle and audible versions. I hope this reaches you, as I'd sincerely love to help in any way I'm able. ![]() ![]() People with an imagination like yours are to be treasured, as I believe you must be by all of your readers. I only wish I had your kind of imagination, but alas, that was not to be. I certainly can't find any criticisms of your imaginative story line(s) or development of your characters. I've noticed that your later novels have fewer of the errors I noticed in the first ones, so I believe you've either learned more about grammar and punctuation or have brought in another person who's good at them. In fact, if you only trust me to re-edit your early books (or even just one as a test), I'd be glad to do that, too. I'm completely retired and have little else to do, so I'd be glad to help with your editing without any charge. I understand why those errors got through, as you've self-published your wonderful books, but think a little extra help may be called for. The errors or typos I've noticed in your books aren't the world's worst, by any means, but can be distracting for anyone who is used to perfectly and professionally edited novels. Bob Blanton-I'm not sure how else to contact you, but would like to offer my help in editing your works, which I absolutely love (13 in the Delphi line, so far)! I have a bachelor's and master's degrees in English, and taught Composition 1 in college for a few semesters, so I've graded/edited plenty of papers besides my own.
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